grey whiteness of fog against still
invisible ridge
motionless black branch next to
fence in foreground
touched by being what is, think
reflection of words
explaining each other, so green,
background figures
lack of sequence either from word
to word or phrase
to phrase makes a reader impatient
with abstraction
grey whiteness of fog against top
of shadowed ridge
white line of wave breaking across
mouth of channel
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