first pale orange of sky above blackness
of trees, whiteness of half moon by leaf
in foreground, sound of waves in channel
elements of picture, itself
meaning in perception
e.g., the logical character
of construction, fact
grey-white clouds reflected in channel,
shadowed slope of cliff across from it
Hi Stephen,
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More directly, given the double-spacing of all the previous posts, I'm guessing it's just a formatting typo today....
As you know, I love these posts-poem(s). Keep on keeping on, and continued best wish with it!
Steven, thanks for noting this (typo!) and for the good words (!)
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