1.16

edge of sun coming up into motionless bamboo leaves 

two sparrows flapping from fence to feeder below it 

field of form with respect to field observe at rest  

sequence of from from here forward close to the sun 

two figures standing on sand edge of water reflects 

sun going down cloud on horizon another to the left 

red orange edge of cloud across from shadowed ridge 

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

1.15

first pink light in clouds beside still black ridge 

sparrows flapping down from edge of fence to feeder 

looking at size of figure relation to kind of light 

time of subject become a form therefore always less 

pattern of shadowed wet rocks on sand in foreground 

seen at eye level sunlight reflected across from it  

red orange curve of clouds beside shoulder of ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel

1.14

light coming into pale blue white sky next to ridge 

sparrow on fence another on the bricks below feeder  

reflection makes act of subject seen object thought 

system of notation a kind of hand according to part  

brightness become an object in the sense of shining  

light grounded in fact the experience first morning 

reddish orange edge of sky beside shoulder of ridge 

shadowed swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

1.13

grey whiteness of clouds against top of black ridge 

three sparrows on fence two on bricks beside feeder 

reflected also saw the image related to thoughts on 

location things in such a way that allows for space 

present here the relation room which contains space 

things appear as objects time on clock hand in view 

grey white rain cloud against top of shadowed ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel

1.12

pink red edge of grey cloud above still black ridge 

two sparrows slanting down from fence toward feeder 

second years appeared up to but not including first  

distinct but also one the other more than matter of 

sparrow flapping through open green glass back door 

wrapped up in towel at window lifted out flies away 

pink red edge of grey cloud on horizon beside ridge 

shadowed white swell moving toward mouth of channel

1.11

bright white edge of sun in windblown bamboo leaves  

four sparrows flapping from edge of fence to feeder  

fact of motion a field appears to be another system 

direction of light translated to present it follows 

brightness become an object in the sense of shining  

light grounded in fact the experience first morning 

white circle of sun in line of clouds above horizon 

lines of white waves breaking onto concrete seawall

1.10

first grey light in sky beside black plane of ridge  

sparrow pecking up seeds from bricks next to feeder 

landscape only once as far as remember each morning 

everywhere as a sequence of positions less and less  

lines of reflected yellow orange light disappearing  

water pulling back across sand sounds in foreground 

red orange edge of clouds next to shoulder of ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel