10.21

pink whiteness of clouds above black plane of ridge

planet behind black pine branch in right foreground

friend put in touch with, correspondence with ideas

seems secure, relation to seems, that when thinking

good that you had the chance to see these relations

so that someone including you might think something

pink red lines of clouds above still shadowed ridge

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

10.20

diagonal lines of clouds above still shadowed ridge

blue jay calling on pine branch in right foreground

last, as if these details could answer my questions

register as moment place, seeing eye object, itself

helped by the fact that original forbid photography

word of mouth turned space into meeting place where

grey whiteness of clouds above still shadowed ridge

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

10.19

dream in unmade yellow and blue bed opposite window

father walking in the front door taller than before

“these,” among the change we perceive in rigid body

forces, no point in this, far from origin of source

man in straw hat and white tee shirt bringing gifts

for everyone wind blows bottles off table on bricks  

grey blackness of fog against top of shadowed ridge

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

10.18

grey blackness of fog against still invisible ridge

motionless black branches above fence in foreground

letting everything escape after, who to begin again

picked earth out of grass and, “look here,” he says

father hitting oldest daughter in chin who is doing

homework yelling “I get no respect from this child”

grey blackness of fog still against invisible ridge

shadowed white line of wave breaking across channel

10.17

blue blackness of sky above shadowed plane of ridge

moon above planet behind branch in right foreground

quality of looking, being the only one to do so set

measured works, result of same form, in figure same

some people are wacky others melancholy Keats wrote

an “Ode” on it having read Burton’s Anatomy thereon

yellow red orange of sky above still shadowed ridge

upturned curve of moon beside planet across from it

10.16

first grey light coming sky above still black ridge

planet below moon next to pine branch in foreground

found enough landscape to recall, three years later

lacking it, he remains in relation to, “outside” it

space inhabited about a third smaller than original

material language on one space translated into this

pale red orange of cloud above still shadowed ridge

shadowed white line of wave breaking across channel  

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10.15

pink line of jet trail in pale blue sky above ridge

red-shouldered hawk calling on branch in foreground

forgotten here years ago, certain after its thought

what he knew to be solid, weave of aspects, contour

82 year-old mother recalling “Chinese Chimes” as if

we were some sort of well-ordered corporate venture

yellow red orange of sky above still shadowed ridge

shadowed white wave breaking into windblown channel