white edge of grey cloud above
shadowed green ridge
two white-crowned sparrows landing
on redwood fence
chosen because this way knows the
following instant
person not possible to refer to
the sun wind viewed
what was happening in the picture
an event material
person’s hand approaching the
two-dimensional plane
sunlit whiteness of cloud next to
shoulder of ridge
shadowed line of swell approaching
mouth of channel
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