light coming into cloud in front
of invisible ridge
motionless black pine branches
across redwood fence
could instead be the fact which
had served as model
noticeable measure of difference
nature of language
example for one thing how last two
lines transcribe
something seen when out there in
water at eye level
grey rain cloud against invisible
shoulder of ridge
diagonal white line of wave
breaking across channel
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