pink red lines of clouds above
black plane of ridge
sound of bird chirping on branch
in left foreground
fifteen and twelve before a dozen,
to have at least
seen when we look things, image
falls away, “image”
twelve lines comma breaking the
rhythm of each line
separate from connected to the
line before after it
grey line of cloud above shadowed
shoulder of ridge
five white egrets gliding to the
right toward point
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