light coming into sky above still black
ridge, whiteness of moon next to branch
in foreground, sound of wave in channel
elsewhere which will appear
in this, pointing to
it as such, surface objects
not there, shadow of
grey white clouds to the left of point,
shadowed green pine on tip of sandspit
Hi Stephen,
ReplyDeleteDoes this 1000 day/page poem, that I now figure out began January 5, 2011, have the same title as the one completed January 4, 2011.
My desire for things to be neat and clean would have liked to have seen all the new ones on a new blog, with a new title, assuming there is a new title. Unless I'm missing something?
Steven,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the “comment” — a good question! I too thought to start a new blog for this 'new work' – which did begin on January 5 (after I finished the 1,000 pages of Temporality) and which, for now at least, I’m calling Temporality II — but couldn’t figure out how to set it up as a new site (it didn’t somehow ‘work’), and also thought that whoever was looking/reading pages from Temporality on the blog might lose track of something (?) if things changed to a new site so I simply kept going --- without any notice of the ‘shift’. . . .