Sunday, November 16, 2014

11.16



light coming into sky above still black
ridge, golden-crowned sparrow’s oh dear
in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      position of shadowed object
      in light, translucent

      “aspect,” analysis replaced
      by perspective, “date”

pale orange lines of clouds above ridge,
cormorants flapping across toward point


2 comments:

  1. Stephen, interesting. You have begun to add commentaries ("position of shadowed objects.... towards point) to your strict delianations of light, I think. Ciao, Murat

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  2. thanks for this Murat, just now found -- nice to see someone is noticing 'something' (otherwise what?). . .

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