light coming into sky above
still black
ridge, golden-crowned sparrow’s
oh dear
in foreground, sound of wave
in channel
position of shadowed object
in light, translucent
“aspect,” analysis replaced
by perspective, “date”
pale orange lines of clouds
above ridge,
cormorants flapping across
toward point
Stephen, interesting. You have begun to add commentaries ("position of shadowed objects.... towards point) to your strict delianations of light, I think. Ciao, Murat
ReplyDeletethanks for this Murat, just now found -- nice to see someone is noticing 'something' (otherwise what?). . .
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