1.31

light gray rain clouds against shadowed green ridge 11 sparrows landing by seeds on table next to fence 

pictures positions more than coming back to looking for what returns light one thing memory of arriving 

breathing in breathing out eyes opening motion of wet green bamboo leaves in window yellow and blue bed 

gray white rain clouds above shadowed shoulder of ridge windblown wave breaking on sand next to channel

1.30

light gray whiteness of clouds above shadowed green ridge fifteen quails by seeds on table beside fence 

transition see September position in transcript of earlier versions letters impressions of altered part 

breathing in eyes closed opening shadowed green trees below clouds in window beside yellow and blue bed 

gray whiteness of clouds above shadowed shoulder of ridge wave breaking on sand to the right of channel

1.29

light gray clouds above shadowed green ridge sixteen quails landing beside seeds on table next to fence 

see pieces of wood part the ship same color structure perception reason hand the object based on shadow 

breathing in eyes opening light gray clouds above shadowed green branches in window yellow and blue bed 

gray whiteness of clouds next to shadowed shoulder of ridge wave breaking onto sand across from channel

1.28

horizontal line of cloud in pale blue sky above ridge 11 sparrows landing by seeds on table below fence 

point of a picture seen by someone sunlight in context of person chosen situation in the grip of vision 

breathing our eyes closed opening sun rising across from branches in window next to yellow and blue bed 

blinding white circle of sun in cloud above shoulder of ridge wave breaking on sand across from channel

1.27

cloudless pale blue sky above shadowed green ridge 16 quails landing next to seeds on table below fence 

field in the first place second hand expression may also be carried out taking all three terms together 

breathing in breathing out eyes opening quails calling on bricks below window above yellow and blue bed 

blinding white circle of sun coming up next to shoulder of ridge wave breaking against concrete seawall

1.26

shadowed gray line of cloud in pale blue sky above ridge 11 sparrows next to seeds on table below fence 

systems relative to finite part of spade velocity of matter in all directions motions compared to light 

breathing out eyes opening sunlit white cloud above shadowed trees in window beside yellow and blue bed 

bright white edges of cloud next to shoulder of ridge no waves breaking on sand to the right of channel

1.25

sunlit white clouds in pale blue sky above ridge 10 sparrows landing next to seeds on table below fence 

translation of the way means within limits capable of speaking for itself beginning with first fragment 

breathing in eyes opening clouds in pale blue sky above branches of trees in window yellow and blue bed 

red orange circle of sun coming up above shoulder of ridge waves breaking on corner of concrete seawall