5.9

grey whiteness of fog against top of shadowed ridge

silhouette of crow landing on edge of redwood fence

volume in lost last page different ending in letter

activity on the way to speaks in its original sense

listening to reading includes memory of that moment

someone talking about how the “d” turns into an “o”

grey white fog still against invisible top of ridge

diagonal white line of wave breaking across channel

5.8

blinding white circle of sun coming up beside ridge

unseen birds chirping from field in left foreground

appears to believe he know thinking might have seen

physical limit of form everything comes together in

father who feels pleasure in having son as shipmate

hoping to sail full many a league for years to come

blinding white sun by cloud above shoulder of ridge

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

5.7

blinding white circle of sun next to shadowed ridge

song sparrow calling on bamboo branch next to fence

fact of an event less in picture than form of touch

bodies also in world by any means in order to adapt

confined to a house place experience time as series

present moments rather than endless linear sequence

pale blue whiteness of sky beside shoulder of ridge

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

5.6

white circle of sun rising beside still black ridge

shadowed bamboo leaves moving next to redwood fence

how to mention attitude toward pictures and figures

same appearance in more than one way showing itself

one making late take off under breaking lip of wave

figure further inside disappearing into white water

blinding whiteness of sun next to shoulder of ridge

lines of waves breaking to the right across channel

5.5

blinding white of sun beside tree-lined green ridge

grasses in field beginning to move as wind comes up

note previous aspect of thing made from proposition

color continues color remains after years of change

how notes in music change sounds of words in a song

rhythmic motion of words determined by song’s notes

white circle of sun in blue white sky next to ridge

sunlit lines of waves approaching windblown channel

5.4

blinding white circle of sun coming up beside ridge

hummingbird hovering to the left of glass back door

letter missing the last page going back to original

performs alongside here and there also says how far

shadows on paper appearing to be moving handwritten

page in relation to feel of typed gap between words

pale blue whiteness of sky beside shoulder of ridge

line of light reflected in still motionless channel

5.3

white circle of sun in bright blue sky beside ridge

crow flapping to edge of redwood fence above feeder

resemblance close to line of hills appears parallel

repeatable sense of focus vision which only expands

yellow of iris to the left of green glass back door

blackness of crows calling on branches we don’t see

white circle of sun next to black shoulder of ridge

sunlit white lines of waves breaking across channel