1.15

pink cloud in pale blue sky above still black ridge

whiteness of waning moon next to tip of rose branch

there figures of people light on house and sidewalk

way by which what it is doing keeps at once present

man standing in blue pajamas woman in black sitting

faces him window between them blue chair blue walls

yellow red orange sky above black shoulder of ridge

shadowed swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

1.14

diagonal lines of white clouds above plane of ridge

line of sparrows standing on edge of shadowed fence

same painting a lasting one also seems at this time

dream armature of planes think form and containment

something conditioned outside what is to be thought

less than thinking in the sense of made things seen

whiteness of sun coming up behind cloud above ridge

two cormorants flapping to the right toward horizon

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1.13

cloudless blue white sky above black plane of ridge

two sparrows perched on redwood fence beside feeder

two events taking place simultaneous appear instant

field relative to time of describing certain action

writing down exactly what happens in moment of real

actual perception of sound as acoustic shape in air

blinding white edge of sun on horizon next to ridge

white line of light reflected in motionless channel

1.12

pink light coming into clouds beside shadowed ridge

black shapes of bamboo leaves next to redwood fence

closer to what is closest now to be nearer at first

as for landscape setting the last hour of the night

seen from view which changes as soon as it is named

knowledge that transposes itself into simple action

yellow red orange sky above black shoulder of ridge

white lines of waves breaking into mouth of channel

1.11

diagonal edge of cloud in pale blue sky above ridge

seven sparrows standing on fence across from feeder

near the idea of an intention would be able to swim

structure refers to number of conditions final line

first words in the first four scenes of Shakespeare

Twelfth Night makes an ABBA If What What If pattern

blinding whiteness of sun below cloud next to ridge

yellow line of light floating on motionless channel

1.10

white line of cloud in blue white sky next to ridge

sun coming up in shadowed bamboo leaves above fence

letter will continue a new picture of outside night

present saying the time on that day in such a shape

emotional feeling in response to this can’t explain

see same thing each day moon comes up sun goes down

yellow red orange of sky by black shoulder of ridge

parallel swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

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1.9

rain cloud moving to the right above shadowed ridge

white-crowned sparrow landing on feeder below fence

seen the movement made evening held in order to see

somewhat left but still responsive portion of dream

likewise the last two lines some kind of mesmerizes

attention to whatever being looked at minute shifts

dark grey rain cloud against invisible top of ridge

shadowed white wave breaking into windblown channel