10.7

grey whiteness of fog against top of shadowed ridge 

blue jay pecking up seeds from feeder next to fence 

morning more than instance what happens among trees 

in this way a consequence opening up whether or not 

cloud moves across tops of trees makes wind visible 

moment of sparrow slanting from fence toward bricks 

sunlit edges of grey white fog against top of ridge 

two pelicans flapping across horizon toward channel

10.6

light grey whiteness of fog against invisible ridge  

circular pink white rose on edge of fence by feeder  

heat of the sun feeling all this light object touch 

 

appeared in period given by letter content and form 

 

sun comes up makes three words one time progression 

 

motion follows one after another as still as can be 

 

grey whiteness of fog against still invisible ridge 

 

line of pelicans disappearing in fog across channel

10.5

light grey whiteness of fog against invisible ridge 

motion of shadowed green bamboo leaves across fence 

drawing on paper water part place transfer to place 

as bridge crosses the stream one side against other 

cloud moves across tops of trees makes wind visible 

moment of sparrow slanting from fence toward bricks 

grey whiteness of fog still against invisible ridge 

line of 4 pelicans flapping into fog across channel

10.4

light coming into fog against still invisible ridge  

sparrow pecking up seeds from bricks next to feeder 

without perspective two bottles almost totally flat 

figure at first present position front away from it 

whether to think after what thought from a distance  

relation to difference between the object and place 

grey whiteness of fog still against invisible ridge 

line of 6 pelicans disappearing into fog on horizon

10.3

grey whiteness of fog against still invisible ridge  

3 sparrows standing on edge of fence next to feeder 

event present by means of light upper half of point 

compare circle become in real time imaginary motion 

entering into accomplishment of event comes to pass 

disappearing and coming back perhaps from elsewhere 

white circle of sun above line of fog against ridge 

line of white wave breaking across mouth of channel

10.2

yellow red orange sun rising into smoke above ridge 

sparrow pecking up seeds from bricks next to feeder 

ground level light how sun in picture to talk about 

thinking ahead the word makes first what is thought 

sound of word traced back to acoustic and emotional 

object of meaning a matter of part of body thinking 

blinding white sun in smoke above shoulder of ridge 

line of pelicans flapping from point toward channel

10.1

grey whiteness of fog smoke against invisible ridge 

sparrow slanting from feeder to field in foreground 

something present at a given moment midst of things

moment that today remains concealed see view period 

fragment at times instead of having words preserved 

given a way of moving toward shimmer that brightens 

reddish circle of sun in smoke by shoulder of ridge 

line of pelicans flapping from point toward channel