1.7

cloud in window opposite unmade yellow and blue bed

rain drops falling on brick red plane in foreground

position by starting from field variable, different

light in combination with it, when measured, system

house on Poplar just the same, different paint more

muted drapes pulled back in the living room windows

grey rain cloud against invisible shoulder of ridge

whiteness of wave breaking across windblown channel

1.6

grey whiteness of clouds above still shadowed ridge

silhouette of sparrow perched on post in foreground

showing that corresponds, speaking in comparison to

first line or two, called monologue, change view of

“all work is in dialogue with work, text or person,

yours one-sided, closer to monologue than dialogue”

sunlit red orange of clouds above shoulder of ridge

line of wave breaking in windblown mouth of channel

1.5

light coming into clouds above black plane of ridge

motionless black branches above fence in foreground

becomes another fact that is, not that there is one

close one’s eyes to some, has disappeared, is still

you’ve got to be able to read (“see”) them together

(series) in order to get what’s actually “going on”

grey line of cloud above shadowed shoulder of ridge

gull flapping to the right above motionless channel

1.4

first grey light in clouds above blackness of ridge

sound of jet passing to the right above pine branch

that year from or between number of, record keeping

in which object announces itself, can be it, before

“I don’t know what in the world you can make out of

this but it’s there, ‘for the record,’ as they say”

grey rain cloud above still black shoulder of ridge

shadowed white line of wave breaking across channel

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1.3

rain clouds moving to the left above shadowed ridge

silhouette of sparrow landing on post in foreground

movement evident, however is not personal in nature

not grasped by intuition, mirror image, one another

narrative structure is only suggested, enough vivid

detail to picture scene, subject moving about in it

grey white rain cloud against top of shadowed ridge

line of pelicans gliding to the left toward channel

1.2

light coming into clouds above still shadowed ridge

sparrow slanting toward pine branches in foreground

second number, account of where one may bring about

when viewed from, follows from, where it is assumed

woman’s letter from Paris saying “you don’t know us

yet but we know you though we haven’t seen you yet”

motionless grey rain clouds above shoulder of ridge

shadowed white line of wave breaking across channel

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1.1

cloudless blue white sky above black plane of ridge

silhouette of sparrow perched on post in foreground

first in sight, appearing between correspondence to

way of thinking and line, called point, look for it

you’re waiting for the moment when something you’ve

seen is illustrated -- then you don’t stop to think

orange edge of sun in cloud above shoulder of ridge

gull flapping to the right above motionless channel