4.5

grey whiteness of clouds above shadowed

plane of ridge, quail calling Chi-ca-go

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      the fact that in place of

      it, had no sense of

      does that also start here,

      seems to, two times

pale blue whiteness of sky above ridge,

white line of wave in mouth of channel

4.4

light coming into clouds above shadowed

plane of ridge, red-tailed hawk calling

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      instances which expressed

      it, “between about”

      even by itself as long as,

      when these, in this

blue white sky above shoulder of ridge,

white line of wave breaking in channel

4.3

cloudless blue white sky above shadowed

plane of ridge, motionless black branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      apparent colors which are

      lines, is an effect

      of it, to make up what is

      described, “you say”

red orange sky above shoulder of ridge,

cormorant flapping across toward point

4.2

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, two birds slanting toward branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      later above all attention,

      made it possible to

      view, following curvature

      of space, spherical

pale blue whiteness of sky above ridge,

white line of wave breaking in channel

4.1

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, branches moving in wind in right

foreground, no sound of wave in channel

      looking itself appearance,

      thinking of what is

      this kind of same, notice

      stone, toward right

clouds above shadowed shoulder of ridge,

pelicans flapping across toward channel