11.12

light coming into clouds above shadowed

plane of ridge, red-tailed hawk calling

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

relation which follows from

this when, in that it

in place of it, thing which

is described, is that

grey of rain cloud moving across ridge,

drops splashing into windblown channel

11.11

light coming into clouds above shadowed

ridge, motion of black leaves on branch

in foreground, wave sounding in channel

is thought here in position,

"subject" "experience"

could be, what we are shown,

the look of some blue

silver of sunlight reflected in channel,

white cloud in pale blue sky on horizon

11.10

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, whiteness of moon next to branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

there, nothing more carried

forward by line which

is this, continuing further

toward here, becoming

first orange of sun rising above ridge,

white line of jet trail across from it

11.9

pink orange of clouds above still black

plane of ridge, leaves moving on branch

in foreground, wave sounding in channel

sketch in letter wanting to

write to you, present

means something, has always

been, become manifest

edge of sun rising above shadowed ridge,

line of cloud on horizon across from it

11.8

first grey light in sky above blackness

of ridge, silver of planet above branch

in foreground, wave sounding in channel

absence beyond itself, form

of appearance between

figures, ground unspecified,

though only during it

orange circle of sun rising above ridge,

sunlit clouds on horizon across from it

11.7

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, sparrow standing on granite rock

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

structure of field or space,

of physical phenomena

sign of which, is therefore

possible, loss of its

silver line of sun reflected in channel,

sunlit clouds on horizon across from it

11.6

light coming into sky above black plane

of ridge, jet passing above pine branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

a reference to this that is

sometimes there, what

was before, became realized,

seems to have started

darkness of cloud to the left of point,

shadowed green pine on tip of sandspit