light coming into fog against
still invisible ridge
shadowed pink roses above fence in
right foreground
mark concerning not lost, river
flowing in field of
beginning to read, before first
look, at least this
so too in reader’s or listener’s
experience of poem
things not noticed more effective
than noticed ones
grey whiteness of fog against top
of shadowed ridge
orange line of lights reflected in
mouth of channel
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