3.31

light coming into blue blackness of sky above ridge 

waning white moon beside rose branch across from it 

rhythmic pen and ink garden such as trees in corner 

replaced by what is more dimension height and depth 

relation of one to think of here question of saying 

one stands in a clearing as rock or tree looks into 

blue blackness of sky above black shoulder of ridge 

bright whiteness of moon above point across from it

3.30

cloudless blue white sky above black plane of ridge 

first two sparrows perched on feeder three on fence 

subject found which other one meant a sense of form 

before its appearance in foreground distant element 

sparrows moving back and forth from fence to feeder 

to fence again cold spring wind sound in foreground 

edge of sun coming up above black shoulder of ridge 

shadowed white line of wave breaking across channel

3.29

first light coming into sky above still black ridge 

white circle of moon beside branches across from it 

instant condition of time the body as material part 

notes velocity of light in same gravitational field 

measure the attempt to bring the word into relation 

scale itself light in the expanse of its appearance 

reddish orange edge of sky beside shoulder of ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel

3.28

light grey whiteness of fog against invisible ridge 

sparrows lined up on edge of fence others on feeder 

space between movement and trees continues the body 

something thought of ground in relation to thinking 

shadows of sunlit green of leaves against weathered 

wood of grape stake fence the edge of pale blue sky 

grey whiteness of fog against still invisible ridge 

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.27

white circle of sun in shadowed green bamboo leaves 

four sparrows pecking up seeds on table below fence 

day to become an actual condition same side as when 

see note above second seems both ends at this point 

first to open in such a way as to see unfold itself 

sound saying to listen thought that thinking thinks 

sun rising in cloudless bright blue sky above ridge 

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.26

cloudless pale blue sky beside black plane of ridge 

seven sparrows landing on table four more on feeder 

during a number period lines covering most of sheet 

distance in space now present appears some position 

rain for days in western Australia attending breath 

something about a separation between fence and vine 

first edge of sun coming up above shoulder of ridge 

windblown white wave breaking into mouth of channel

3.25

pink red edge of cloud in pale blue sky above ridge 

7 sparrows pecking up seeds on table four on feeder 

beginning to call then discovered spatial construct 

semblance of corner a distant doorway in foreground 

yellow light defining the cracks the shape of lines 

curved in opposite direction ridge beside shoreline 

red orange of cloud next to black shoulder of ridge 

shadowed blue lines of swells moving toward channel

3.24

high thin white clouds in pale blue sky above ridge 

sound of first bird chirping on fence in foreground 

increment of four itself referred to condition body 

form of gravitation field from standpoint of degree 

going head first off front of board before hands go 

up head hits sand seeing stars electric shocks body 

red orange edge of sky on horizon across from ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth or channel

3.23

light coming into cloudless blue sky by black ridge 

sparrows lined up on edge of fence 4 more on feeder 

building on hill at bottom left space of foreground 

shows by means first a sequence beginning to appear 

inside the feeling of cold spring wind this morning 

eyes open to sunlit green bamboo leaves above fence 

reddish orange edge of sky beside shoulder of ridge 

shadowed swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

3.22

first light coming into blue black sky beside ridge 

blue jay landing on table sparrows perched on fence 

who sees going up make at some point its appearance 

absent from parallel fifth between first and second 

slanted trunk of walnut tree green of orchid leaves 

below it red petals everything going on all at once 

reddish grey edge of sky by black shoulder of ridge 

shadowed blue lines of swells moving toward channel

3.21

sun coming up into cloudless blue sky next to ridge 

4 sparrows landing on feeder more lined up on fence 

limited to the first two weeks during fourteen days 

same word means an intervening space between things 

slanted trunk of walnut tree green of orchid leaves 

below it red petals everything going on all at once 

blinding white circle of sun next to shadowed ridge 

white wave breaking on sand to the right of channel

3.20

first light coming into sky above still black ridge 

sound of birds chirping from branches in foreground 

 

future idea breakup of form began to see in various 

back at upper left receding perspective figure head 

view of white late afternoon cloud in pale blue sky 

man in wetsuit next to seawall walking toward water 

shadowed line of clouds in sky by shoulder of ridge 

circular orange light on horizon to the right of it

3.19

light grey whiteness of fog against invisible ridge 

eight sparrows lined up on fence two more on feeder 

portion of shaded thing it follows form in same way 

nature of those which take place relative to system 

bird flapping left to right into and out of picture 

disappears above waves breaking on concrete seawall 

sunlit white edge of fog against top of black ridge 

white lines of waves breaking into mouth of channel

3.18

grey white rain cloud against top of shadowed ridge 

7 sparrows standing on fence flapping down to table 

trees in different pictures at the same time things 

concealed what in the open reflection seems to view 

view of white late afternoon cloud in pale blue sky 

man in wetsuit next to seawall walking toward water 

light grey rain cloud above black shoulder of ridge 

whiteness of wave breaking across windblown channel

3.17

grey whiteness of clouds above shadowed green ridge 

sparrows on edge of fence flapping across to feeder 

one beginning to take on shape day who has not seen 

parts of event repetition occurs for the first time 

opening eyes a quarter at a time returning to world 

weather coming in hear birds waking up in the trees 

light grey whiteness of sky above shoulder of ridge 

white lines of waves breaking into mouth of channel

3.16

blinding circle of sun in bamboo leaves above fence 

four sparrows landing on feeder eight more on table 

allowed to go beyond walls to garden with old trees 

distance in room made by space positions a distance 

close-up view of pink white rose on left whispering 

something to the pink white rose on right listening 

sun rising in cloudless bright blue sky above ridge

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.15

white edge of sun rising in windblown bamboo leaves 

sparrows flapping to feeder and back again to fence 

see how sense of physical element continued to call 

turns out to be two features ceiling above the door 

light green of leaves on branch sunny side of fence 

green bud coming out tip of branch on shadowed side

bright white sun in clouds beside shoulder of ridge 

whiteness of wave breaking across windblown channel

3.14

grey whiteness of clouds above shadowed green ridge 

blue jay standing on table three sparrows on feeder 

four extended over shade portion form between limit 

makes field a matter of this view not less physical 

first view of white cloud reflected in blue channel 

vertical relationship to second rocks below surface 

grey whiteness of clouds by black shoulder of ridge 

swell line moving across windblown mouth of channel

3.13

grey whiteness of clouds above shadowed green ridge 

sparrows flapping down from edge of fence to feeder 

one seems to note minus tone of tree in the picture 

appearing and letting appear stands out in the open 

view of cloud in sky looking larger than foreground 

another viewer who is thinking of what light can do  

sunlit lower edge of cloud beside shoulder of ridge 

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.12

white circle of sun in shadowed green bamboo leaves 

3 sparrows landing on table 4 more on edge of fence 

only one field or other feel as if one here present 

first interval between another given parts of notes 

breathing in and out sound of birds half way around  

world the eyes slowly opening one quarter at a time 

sun in cloudless blue sky next to shoulder of ridge 

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.11

sun rising in clouds through shadowed bamboo leaves 

sparrow pecking up seeds on table two more on fence 

following one the letter reference to work on paper 

locate in space a place between measurable distance 

water in channel on left side of concrete wall sand 

on right white of wave blue line of sky below cloud 

dark grey rain clouds against top of shadowed ridge 

shadowed swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

3.10

sunlit edges of cloud in pale blue sky beside ridge 

7 sparrows lined up on edge of fence next to feeder 

saw more in everyday object than observer described 

becomes closer still set off against receding space 

closing one’s eyes quiet the mind look what happens 

budding pink rose next to blooming one conversation 

blinding white circle of sun in cloud next to ridge 

sound of waves breaking on sand across from channel

3.9

light grey rain cloud against top if shadowed ridge 

three sparrows standing on table two more on feeder 

assume the body of moment given dimension of volume 

velocity of falling bodies in a gravitational field 

lost in thought of something one moment to the next 

shadowed bird slanting from edge of fence in window 

whitish edge of cloud above black shoulder of ridge 

windblown white wave breaking into mouth of channel

3.8

light grey white of sky beside shadowed green ridge 

five sparrows lined up on fence four more on feeder 

perspective in nature’s scale dead trees clear away 

there still in appearance as to place into the open 

hold the breath for a few moments slowly close eyes  

leaf to the left of tree above fence moving in wind 

light grey rain cloud above black shoulder of ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel

3.7

blinding whiteness of sun in shadowed bamboo leaves 

three sparrows on edge of fence four more on feeder 

room to make other rooms in house in same situation 

references occur in first version material extended 

two middle lines of words turned back on themselves 

hips below shoulders allow body to fall into itself 

white circle of sun in bright blue sky beside ridge 

lines of white waves breaking into mouth of channel

3.6

light coming into blue blackness of sky above ridge 

waning white half moon next to branches above fence 

opposed to landscape of trees a figure of abundance 

come into the open close to that which shows itself 

blue oval of light behind still closed eyes opening 

a quarter at a time hear bird sounds from somewhere 

pink red edge of sky beside black shoulder of ridge 

shadowed line of swell approaching mouth of channel

3.5

white circle of sun in shadowed green bamboo leaves 

 

sparrow standing on edge of fence another on feeder 

control of feeling less than two hundred yards away 

divided into two sections first of which remembered 

time forgetting what remains thinking what is named 

saying meant in the sense of what thought otherwise 

sun beside line of cloud by black shoulder of ridge 

line of white wave breaking across mouth of channel

3.4

blue edge of sky in grey white clouds next to ridge 

sparrows pecking up seeds on table another on fence 

form located on the floor above second floor period 

space relation to buildings following another thing 

first step in this way a small spot in light of sun 

measure according to measure face comes to fragment 

sunlit white edge of cloud beside shoulder of ridge 

white line of wave breaking across mouth of channel

3.3

light grey whiteness of clouds above shadowed ridge 

towhee pecking up seeds on bricks sparrows on fence 

painting things more than they appear to casual eye 

at first appeared on second sight showed a flatness 

something about how the eye changes the light scene 

makes water moving out the channel appear deep blue 

diagonal pale blue line of sky in cloud above ridge 

shadowed swell lines moving toward mouth of channel

3.2

sun in high thin white clouds through bamboo leaves 

sparrows flapping down to feeder then back to fence 

changes take place the moment body result of action 

exactly equivalent space makes it possible to speak 

yellow red orange light comes up behind closed eyes 

sees motion of body on board in white water seawall  

blinding white circle of sun in clouds beside ridge 

white line of wave breaking on sand next to channel

3.1

white circle of sun in shadowed green bamboo leaves 

sparrow landing on fence another on feeder below it 

world of leaf looks light as early summer landscape 

lets come into appearance corresponding to revealed 

view of pale blue white sky in walnut tree branches 

viewer vanishing into two-dimensional picture plane 

blinding white sun rising next to shoulder of ridge 

sound of waves breaking on sand across from channel