2.28

sunlit edges of cloud above still black

plane of ridge, red-tailed hawk calling

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      other sketches after that

      these, another felt

      those who reach, does not

      take place, or from

orange of cloud above shoulder of ridge

line of pelicans gliding toward horizon

2.27

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, red-tailed hawk calling in right

foreground, no sound of wave in channel

      area open inside, several

      shows in comparison

      parallels fragment, other

      words, picture here

orange of cloud above shoulder of ridge,

cormorants flapping across toward point

2.26

light coming into cloud above blackness

of ridge, first bird calling from field

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      hence here again here too

      so that, that space

      should have that which is,

      given by, left side

edge of sun above still shadowed ridge,

white line of wave in mouth of channel

2.25

light coming into sky above still black

ridge, crow calling from cypress branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      look of person that which

      as appears, looking

      first toward those, thing

      behind it, floating

blinding edge of sun rising above ridge,

egret gliding to the right toward point

2.24

light coming into sky above black plane

of ridge, jet passing above pine branch

in foreground, sound of wave in channel

      will be before perception,

      continue to persist

      was there that went after,

      were then more, but

blinding white edge of sun above ridge,

gull gliding to the right toward point